How in the World you dare to fight in the public again, this is disobeying the Prince's order, but since you slain my dear friend, I will definitely fight you, I will slay your life, Tybalt, in order to restore the glory of the Montagues.
After the fight end, Tybalt being slain, and Romeo win
Yes, Mercutio, I did the vengeance for you, you can now rest in peace, I need to get out of this mess before the Prince come and find out this place of a mess. Tybalt I am sorry, I have to kill you, but indeed I don't really want to fight anyone, I just want to stay with my love - Juliet. I will seek Friar for help.
You pointed out the main idea of of this but could have add more dialogue do it sounded a little more like a conversation. The work looks fine how it is. Just a suggestion for next time
ReplyDeleteI like how you summarized what Romeo was thinking while he murdered Tybalt. You provide good insight into what was going on inside Romeo's head. I also like how you showed how reluctant he was to kill Tybalt.
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