Memory
Danielle Vansover

Whatever the season
I’d watch the roses bloom
Without any reason
I’d decide to leave my room
It was a beautiful place
In the house I lived before
I had all the space
And would never wish for more

Deep in the yard
Past the tree and the swings
I would play with and guard
All of nature’s things
It was the place to play
Where the lavender grew
Pretending all day
Underneath the sky’s blue
Nobody knew
Of this place that I found
Where the wind calmly blew
In a soft and kind sound
But soon came the end
The day we moved away
All the time I would spend
Soon became grey
These are the memories
The small ones
The ones from our youth
The ones we oddly remember
And this, this one’s mine

I really like how for the first stanzas you rhymed, then when you got to the last stanza you stopped rhyming and it really put a big emphasis on the fact that you are not in the place where you have all these great memories.
ReplyDeleteNice job! Your poem was short and sweet, and I liked how you used a lot of descriptive details (the images are amazing as well). It really makes you think about your own memories and how sometimes even small things can still be important...
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