The Things We Take for Granted
A man lays in bed,
sleeping soundly
There is,
a log cabin that stands in a clearing
surrounded by mountains
with chiseled faces
Far over to the east,
the sun peeks over
a sea of rolling hills
the first glimpse
of golden morning light reflects off
of jagged mountains
light floods
the sacred valley,
casting away
the spell of night
A river flows to the west
crystal clear water
once frozen and hardened
high in the mountains
brings life to the valley
through veins carved in the earth
There is a tree
in the corner of this clearing
whose deep seeded roots
stretch downward into the rich brown soil
and whose tired twisted branches
have been called
home many times before
Harsh winds
that strike the backs of the mountains
are lulled into a quiet zephyr as they float down into the valley
the gentle breeze playfully tousles the leaves
And the man,
lays in bed,
sleeping soundly
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