Imagine
Imagine not having a voice
Imagine not having a voice
You speak
People ignore you
You are now the radio
Something that is constantly talking
But no one is ever listening
They make it seem
As if you were pushed underwater
No one but you can hear the sound coming from within
Like you are not like them
You think you do everything fine
You think you are nice
You know you hear them
Why can’t they hear you?
The one kid you try your hardest with
Ends up being mean
He hates you
Doesn’t let you speak
Doesn’t let you talk
He makes you feel miserable
He makes people
Not listen
Not talk
Not be with you
Just because of him
You don’t have a voice
You can’t say what you want
You can’t do what you want
And because of him
And because of him
People don’t listen
Since when do you have to bottle up your feelings from fear of him?
You stop caring and
Splat!
You fall off the bridge
Just imagine
Imagine not having a voice
I love the usage of words in your poem. The similes and metaphors you used really help describe what you are trying to say.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you included a lot of repetition and many similes and metaphors. Also, when you talked about the bridge at the very end that was extremely random but you caught my attention due to the surprise.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. I liked the use of a lot of repetition and comparisons that you used.
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