It can go up
Then it moves quickly down
It can be difficult
To change the path of it
Change can be good
But sometimes
People say it can be bad
Right as you think it is going well
It breaks down
In the process you can be hurt
Sometimes it is fixed
Sometimes it never
Never
is the way it used to be
It is rough
It could also be boring
It could be fun
You can sometimes get sick
And want to stop
But keep going
Others tell them to stop
Eventually they stop
And all of them
All of them end
Great poem! I really like the idea of your poem, you also used really good examples.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you drew similarities between riding a roller coaster and experiencing love.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds so great! I really like your comparisons.
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