Michelle Odnert
I’m sorry
I’m sorry to everyone whose voice hasn’t been heard
To those whose thoughts have been chained by mine
You probably had something better to say
Something smarter
And yet I was the one to speak
With my hand in the air
I was a mountain with no roads
No tunnel
And you were a car
My voice was a lightning storm
Keeping you from diving into a pool of answers
And with every word that came out of my mouth
There was a word that could have come from one of you
Sometimes I feel like I speak just for the sake of speaking
To hear the sound of my own voice
I know now what I haven’t known before
That I should give my voice to the voiceless
No longer shall my words impede on those who listen
But here I am
Still speaking to those listening
But you don’t need to raise your hand, no
I need to lower mine
So I promise
That when you speak
I will listen
I’m sorry to the voices
That you couldn’t hear over the sound of mine
I like the picture.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really detailed and your use of poetic devices is phenomenal. I think this poem can relate to a lot of people.
ReplyDeleteI love the honesty in this poem...As someone who is usually comfortable in speaking out loud, I constantly think about how to encourage those who are less comfortable. The metaphor of the mountain and car is quite effective!
ReplyDeletethis is pretty detailed
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