Who am I?
I am Nicole
I am a girl
A girl who loves the people
around me
I deal with a split up family
And want a pet dog
I am a girl
who wishes for life to be
like a painter’s canvas
smooth and colorful
A girl who is curious about the world
And hears music everywhere she goes
I am fourteen years old
I see LA as my second home
I visit quite often
I’m that missing piece
To my family puzzle
I’m also that friend
who will be there
Through the thick and thin
Through the ups and downs
The friend who is not afraid of
A little competition
Throw me the ball; I can handle it
I can take any challenge given
But I can also be
that crazy friend who gets
Overly excited about the little things
Like a sizzling pizza
Or an icy cup of coffee
Or a heart-racing tennis match
I am confident with who I am
I am a strong independent girl
I am proud of who I am
I am Nicole
Great poem! I especially like the last line, it really gives emphasis to the poem.
ReplyDeleteNice Poem. You really explain in detail who you are and you use a lot of great poetic devices.
ReplyDeleteI love how in your poem not only do we get to see who you are because of the descriptions you give, but because of the way the poem feels; light and happy.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made the poem personal and talked about yourself.
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